My story I wrote about my cousin Addie!

Once there was a beautiful girl named Addie Rose Melin. She is the most beautiful girl in the world. She is very very smart. Everyone made fun of her because she was the smartest one in class. They gave her wedgees, knuckle head sandwiches and they even dropped her in the mud! She didn't feel very special, but she was pretty much the most popular girl in the whole world! If they weren't bullying her they were playing with her and everything! But one day while she was waiting to get her hair done all the six year olds were all over the place. So she took the spotlight. She was discovered in a barbershop. The owner of the barbershop just happened to be friends with a specialist. So she gave her mom a card with the number 555-5555 on it. She has been begging for months to have her mom call the number on the card! Her mother got so sick of it that Jamie ( the mom ) had her husband Richard call the number on the card. She became famous! But eventually she brought her brother James and sister Heidi. They soon were all famous! The parents weren't famous but you get the point! Then one day Jamie had surgery and there Aunt Jill had 3 surgeries! She had them on her uterus, gallbladder and wisdom tooth. Thyroid is what their mother Jamie had. They lived happily ever after!